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You have always told me that you'll be there,
But now I'm not even sure if you care.
Times have changed and your love did not last,
Old promises fade away so fast.

Whenever I see you walk by,
I could only stare and say "hi."
Then you start to walk away,
All along I wish you'd stay.

Still keeping my hopes up,
I start reminiscing the time,
Telling myself not to give up,
I remember how your heart captured mine.

Tears constantly flow out of my eyes,
Not wanting to hear any more of your lies.
My heart is suffering,
The pain is engulfing.

Sometimes I wonder if you're still aware,
Of this helpless girl that does nothing but stare.
Do you even know her existence?
This girl you once claimed as your princess.

I see your face, your obsidian eyes,
My heart skips a beat, immediately time flies.
But I could only watch you from afar,
To prevent my heart from getting another scar.
©2008-2009 ~icedollsayaka
:iconicedollsayaka:

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A poem I've written not so long ago... :]

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:icontushantin:
And need my heart
torment my soul?
Unless my love hath another role?
Keep my life afar and bent,
For the tragedy,
For tears I've spent,
For my shattered dreams
Dost thou neglect;
Curse my worth expect...

;D Nice! Not better than Kayeah though~

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~*Chuu*~

A demon with a human body. Go figure!
[link]
:iconicedollsayaka:
thanks :D

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~ ice doll sayaka ~ :3 [link]
:icontushantin:
:P Really? Hehehehe! <3

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~*Chuu*~

A demon with a human body. Go figure!
[link]

When men speak ill of thee, live so as nobody may believe them.
-Plato
:iconkayeah:
wooooooo nice :3 parang nabasah koh n 2 b4 s notebook moh ah!! ^____^

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gallery // gaia
:iconicedollsayaka:
yeap! :D

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~ ice doll sayaka ~ :3 [link]
:iconkezel:
ok ah wa tagal pa pala toh! try kang gumamit ng mga simili at metaphor para mas maganda, keep the reader guessing for what the true meaning is haha:D and don't focus too much on rhyming focusing too much on it could really make a poem boring.

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Each day brings hardship and difficulties,
Each day brings God's great melodies,
Peace, grace and unity,
All sung in perfect harmony

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